Mood Like the Weather

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Summary

Written by hand.

Wendell is an ordinary man. He dreamed of being a meteorologist, but thought software development was a better fit; he needed stability and never fully got over the stage fright of his youth.

Wendell keeps a journal. We note Wendell going through major life events, through the eyes of his journal. Birthdays, the death of a pet, marriage, layoffs; emotional but expected episodes of an ordinary life. What's out of the ordinary is Wendell's particular noting of his special interest: the weather. Every entry includes the day's temperature, high and low, as well as cloud coverage and precipitation.

We notice a striking pattern. The weather is good on days good for Wendell and poor on days that are hard. Every birthday was a bright summer day until 29. Every relative's funeral was accompanied by rain, and the funeral where he truly confronted his mortality was a once-in-a-generation thunderstorm.

Wendell also starts to notice. He doesn't give it much thought. He slowly exhibits signs of taking it seriously, but he's not aware of his growing credence in this preposterous meteorological belief. He starts planning outdoor activities on payday. He subtly forces himself to think pleasant thoughts before going on walks.

He's acting as if it's true and he realizes it. He raises the issue with his wife, citing recent and historical evidence.

• "I won most of my badminton games on sunny days", "You just have a harder time with the rain"
• "Do you remember the storm the day I was laid off", "That was one day, dear"
• "Every childhood birthday was on a sunny day", "Baby, you were born in July"
• "What about all of our anniversaries! Always beautiful, hot weather!", "Wendell... our last anniversary was cold and rainy"

Everything had a clean rebuttal. "Honey, maybe good weather just makes you happier!"

Poring back through his journal, with a bruised ego, Wendell runs some rudimentary statistics, using what he can remember from school. Regardless of the math, the pattern is clear, and Wendell cannot be the crazy one.

In the research he notices a day he had previously overlooked. The year he was unemployed, he won a thousand dollars by taking first in his friends' fantasy football league. It was winter, which Wendell generally disliked, but the weather, oh the weather that day was one of the best in Wendell's memory. Soft snow gently covering his yard, low humidity, no breeze, the light falling of large flakes of snow.

The Super Bowl this year was approaching quickly, and Wendell noticed his local weatherman predicting a similarly idyllic forecast for the day of the big game. A thought crossed Wendell's mind, and he was amazed it hadn't before: the weather will be good, so I'll be happy, and if I bet it all on the game I'd only be happy if I won, therefore if I bet enough money, I'm guaranteed to win.

In secret, Wendell bet $100,000 on the Super Bowl's coin toss, nearly his entire savings at that time.

Super Bowl Sunday came. That morning, Wendell looked outside, and the weather was just as predicted, a gorgeous day. In fact, the weather would remain this beautiful for the rest of the day. The day before, Wendell noted the flaw in his syllogism; it was only a guaranteed win if the weatherman was right. Seeing that the weatherman was, in fact, correct, Wendell felt a warm sense of relief.

Just before 10am was when the call came. His sister struggled to communicate over the phone that their mother had taken a bad fall and was in the hospital. "It's serious, we need you here now."

Wendell's mother lived a ten hour drive away, up in the mountains. He and his wife grabbed their coats and ran into the car; they made the drive in under nine hours.

It wasn't fast enough. By the time he made it, his mother had already passed. He heard the television in the dim hospital waiting room; he lost the coin toss. It took all his strength to raise his head to look out the window to see the same thunderous blizzard he had driven through.

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Wendell Pratt was an ordinary man, which is the sort of thing a man only says about himself after a long argument with the evidence.

As a boy he had wanted to be a meteorologist. He loved that it was a science brave enough to admit it might be wrong — a science of probably, of a chance of, that stood before the whole county each evening and offered its best honest guess. He used to practice in the bathroom mirror, sweeping his hand across an imagined map. But the camera, when it finally came for him in a high-school broadcasting class, found his hands shaking and his voice gone to gravel, and the fright never quite let go. Software development asked nothing of him but correctness, paid well, and — best of all — held still. Wendell needed things to hold still. So he wrote code, and in time he married Dana, and he kept, as he had since he was a boy, a journal.

The journal had one inviolable rule, a ritual so old he no longer saw it: every entry began with the sky. The date, the high and the low, the cloud cover in eighths the way the old almanacs counted it, the precipitation to the hundredth of an inch. Only once the weather was set down did he permit himself the rest of his life. An ordinary Tuesday looked like this:

He did not notice the pattern. The journal noticed it for him, the way a long road notices it has been climbing. It was only there, in twenty years of weather laid end to end, that the thing began to show itself.

His childhood birthdays, for one. He had been born in July, and every July the page came up gold:

And the funerals came up gray. Every one of them — a grandmother, an uncle, the neighbor who had taught him to throw a curveball — arrived under rain, as if the weather kept its own book of the dead. But one funeral sat heavier on the page, the ink pressed harder:

The day the company let him go, the page recorded a squall that arrived, almost punctually, at noon:

He told himself, turning these pages, that he was only a man who saw faces in the wood grain. He told himself this several times, which is how you can tell a man has begun to believe the opposite. And slowly, without quite asking his own permission, he began to act. He moved the cookouts and the long walks to paydays, to the Fridays the forecast smiled on. Before a walk he would sit a moment and arrange his thoughts into something pleasant, the way you tidy a room before a guest arrives, and he could not have told you why.

When at last he said it out loud, he said it to Dana, at the kitchen table, with evidence, like a man presenting to a board.

"I won nearly every badminton match we ever played on a sunny day."

"You just have a harder time in the rain, love."

"The storm — the day I was laid off —"

"That was one day, Wendell."

"Every birthday of my childhood, sunny —"

"Baby. You were born in July."

"Our anniversaries, then. Always hot, always perfect —"

He watched her go gentle, which was worse than if she had laughed. "Wendell. Our last anniversary. It was cold. It rained all afternoon."

He did not have the page in front of him, but he knew she was right, because he had written it, and he had not let himself read it since:

Every stone he set down, she turned over, and beneath each was the same plain worm: maybe good weather just makes you happy. It was a clean theory. It explained everything his theory explained, and it did not require the sky to know his name.

But the anniversary page nagged at him — happy anyway — and a clean theory should not have a but in it. So he went back through the journals, all of them, bruised, and ran the only statistics he could still recall from a single semester a long time ago. A column for good days, a column for bad, a column for the sky; he summed and averaged and computed a correlation he was not entirely sure he had computed correctly. The math wobbled — it depended on how you scored a day, and Wendell was the one scoring — but the pattern beneath the math did not wobble at all. And sitting there at one in the morning with two decades of weather open in front of him, Wendell decided the thing a man decides when the only other option is that he is losing his mind: that he was not the crazy one.

It was in that second reading, near the back, that he found the page he had somehow walked past for years.

That was the winter he had been out of work, a season he hated on principle, and yet here was beauty falling out of a sky he should by every right have resented. So it was not the sun, he realized. It had never been the sun. It was simply that the weather was good on the days that were good for Wendell. The sky did not care for warmth. The sky cared for him.

The Super Bowl was two weeks out. His weatherman — a calm, mustached man Wendell trusted the way other men trust scripture — was promising, for that Sunday, another of those rare and flawless days: high pressure parked over the whole state, sun, a hard bright cold. And there at the kitchen table the thought arrived so cleanly that Wendell was ashamed it had taken him a lifetime.

The weather will be good, so the day will be good for me. If I put everything on the game, the only good version of the day is the one where I win. Therefore, if I bet enough — enough that losing would ruin the day past saving — then the day cannot be good unless I win. And the day will be good. Therefore I win.

He found, the night before, the single loose thread, and he was honest enough to pull it. He even wrote it down, in the careful hand he kept for things that frightened him:

In secret, telling no one, least of all Dana, Wendell put a hundred thousand dollars — very nearly everything they had — on the result of the opening coin toss. Heads.

Sunday came up exactly as promised. He stood at the kitchen window with his coffee and looked out on a morning so clean it ached: still air, a high thin gold, the lawn silvered with a frost that would burn off gently by noon. The weatherman had been right. Wendell felt the warm, loosening relief of a man whose argument has survived contact with the world. The day would be good. The proof was on the other side of the glass.

The phone rang just before ten.

It was his sister, and she could barely get the shape of it out — their mother, a fall, the stairs, the little house up in the mountains, the ambulance already gone. It's bad, Wen. You have to come now.

Their mother lived ten hours north, up where the roads went pale and narrow as they climbed. He and Dana took their coats from the hooks and were in the car before either had finished a sentence. He made the drive in under nine. He remembers almost none of it — only that the snow began somewhere around the third hour and did not stop, that the wipers lost, that the world narrowed to two cones of headlight and the red smear of the truck ahead, and that the radio, when he could bear to have it on, was carrying the game.

He was not fast enough.

She was gone by the time he reached the ward. He stood in the dim waiting room with its one muttering television, and he heard — before he understood that he was hearing it — the announcer running the day back for anyone who had missed it: the final, the halftime, and earlier, much earlier, before any of it, the toss of the coin. Tails. He had lost it hours ago. He had lost it while the frost was still bright on his perfect, faraway lawn.

It took everything left in him to lift his head to the window. Outside, against the glass, came down the same impossible blizzard he had driven through to reach her — thick and roaring and once in a generation — falling on the mountains, and on the hospital, and on Wendell, exactly as hard as the day deserved.

He kept the journal that night, in the car, in the dark of the hospital lot, because the rule was the rule and it was the last thing left that still held still. He got as far as the sky. After that, for the first time in thirty years, there were no words to put beneath it.